Date: Mon, 14 Nov 2005 10:38:43 -0500 (EST)
From: zodiac (zodiac@attrition.org)
To: lyger (lyger@attrition.org)
Subject: Re: Analysis draft posting

On Sun, 13 Nov 2005, lyger wrote:

>> I am always interested in any suggestions or comments. Please send away!

> P1 - horse; anyone
>
> P2 - /s/Discloseur/Disclosure
>
> P2 - degree. My..
>
> P3 - "we rewarded" - "we were rewarded"
>
> down a bit: "article seems to believe" = "article seems to imply"
>
> next paragraph: /s/manor/manner
>
> Schneier paragraph: /s/posses/possess
>
> just playing proofer.  any questions, ping away. :)
>
> lyger

You're my grammar goblin, or something. Made the changes I'll add it to my
analysis section here in a few minutes.

-z



Date: Mon, 14 Nov 2005 16:20:41 -0500 (EST)
From: lyger (lyger@attrition.org)
To: zodiac (zodiac@attrition.org)
cc: security curmudgeon (jericho@attrition.org)
Subject: Re: Analysis draft posting


On Mon, 14 Nov 2005, zodiac wrote:

:  You're my grammar goblin, or something. Made the changes I'll add it to my
:  analysis section here in a few minutes.

jericho probably calls me "ass goblin" when speaking about me to others.



Date: Mon, 14 Nov 2005 17:33:23 -0500 (EST)
From: zodiac (zodiac@attrition.org)
To: lyger (lyger@attrition.org)
cc: security curmudgeon (jericho@attrition.org)
Subject: Re: Analysis draft posting

On Mon, 14 Nov 2005, lyger wrote:

> On Mon, 14 Nov 2005, zodiac wrote:
>
> :  You're my grammar goblin, or something. Made the changes I'll add it to my
> :  analysis section here in a few minutes.
>
> jericho probably calls me "ass goblin" when speaking about me to others.
>

Actually I have it on good authority that he refers to you with the
euphamism "Knob Goblin" at those NAMBLA meetings he goes to.



Date: Mon, 14 Nov 2005 17:38:35 -0500 (EST)
From: lyger (lyger@attrition.org)
To: zodiac (zodiac@attrition.org)
cc: security curmudgeon (jericho@attrition.org), Munge (munge@attrition.org)
Subject: Re: Analysis draft posting


On Mon, 14 Nov 2005, zodiac wrote:

:  Actually I have it on good authority that he refers to you with the euphamism
:  "Knob Goblin" at those NAMBLA meetings he goes to.

from the way jericho tells it, you must have me confused with munge.



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